Ahlus Sunnah wal Jamaah

the empire strikes back…

poetry

Posted by abu ameerah on Sunday, December 24, 2006

one of the children that I tutor wrote this Haiku poem. I thought it was nice and told her that I would post it on my blog. Please be kind….she is a soon-to-be 8 year old and kind of new to the whole creative writing/self-expression thing. Here it is…

Today is winter

I see dark gray clouds and rain…

my old umbrella

Fatima A.

i think it is quite nice actually and she really tried to stick to the basic rules of Haiku. The most obvious being:

1) The 5-7-5 syllable rule for each line

2) The fact that it should only be three line long

3) A focus on nature, seaons, or something that is more than what might be regarded as trivial

Haiku poetry is somewhat interesting — and while i loathed it back in grade school (regarding it only as mindless drivel)…..i now would suggest that you “wiki” it and eventually give Haiku a try.

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2 Responses to “poetry”

  1. My Haiku:

    Im in Al Huda

    Brazen Parents and people

    fear not but rather

    complain and do smear campaigns

    shed a tear or two

    they get what they want here there

    lo! they walk away

    they are glad and conniving

    seething do i do

    seeking justice and revenge

    i proceed with rage

    told religion is advice!!!

  2. lol……..nice

    You still need to ESTABLISH the HAAAAQ!

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